I’m An Invisible
I am Invisible in a world for the visible,
I am frail in the world for the strong,
I am unfamiliar in the world for the known,
I am hushed in a world for the heard,
I am minute in the world for the immense,
I am unnoticed in a world for the noticed,
Yet, the invisible one can thrash over everyone,
The invisible can overcome the visible.
I, the invisible one in this world, am the visible.
- Karelyn U.

4 Comments:
hey,
i luv ur poem but i'm really confused mainly bc of the first 2 lines. its vague to the point where i dont really understand.... BUT I LUV THE IDEA THOUGH!!!!! >.<
Ciara M.
Umm... your poem is a bit confusing 2 me. The idea of it is great but ... its in a way that its almost as if it has no purpose...like it just keeps on saying or emphasizing that your invisible....to make it a little better is to not be so vague and add in a little more detail...
BUt I REALLY LIKE YOUR IDEA THOUGH!!
Its great and on the right track!
Keep up the amazing work!! :D
Corina A.
deeeeeeep x|
- mercedes.
i love this poem; mad deep
-Cruz
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