CDCS Poets

Tuesday, April 29, 2008

Self-Portrait
In your eyes,
I’m a princess,
young and beautiful,
born and raised in a city of monstrous mills,
which were alive, and
admirably standing
overlooking the rivers,
holding down the history
of a vibrant city.
Once hardworking and as efficient as
A black hawk.
Now dead and barren
but they are not forgotten.

I came from a palm tree,
planted in beautiful Quisequeya.
Where the sky is always a light shade of royal blue,
filled with juicy mangos and
and the trees are bearing their children of
green plátanos and ripe aquacates.

I’m a campesina
in the campo.
Picking certain cherries,
bold and big,
the ones that hold the key
to the chamber,
locked and put away.

I am a star,
millions of m i l e s away,
that struggles,
but manages not to be outshone.
Trying so hard to illuminate
the sky.

Hidden in my world
deciphering right
from wrong,
the one that only
I
understand.

By: Audris T

4 Comments:

At 11:22 AM, Anonymous Anonymous said...

What a wonderful way to describe all of your different "selves" in a single poem. Your description of each one is incredible! I re-read this poem several times just to experience the different perspectives again and again.

 
At 6:24 AM, Anonymous Anonymous said...

Audris this is truy wonderful. I keep reading it over and over. Thank you

 
At 11:58 AM, Anonymous Anonymous said...

Audris,
You have a real talent! I hope that you continue to write.
Your images were remarkable. Please keep writing and reading.
I am sure I will see your work published nationally someday.

Concord, Mass. Fan

 
At 6:57 PM, Anonymous Anonymous said...

Audris, I would have to say this is one of my favorite poems on this blog. Keep up the good work . I look forward to reading your poems.

 

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