The Magic Touch
The strings humming in my ear
I dribble the ball side to side
Off the Heee-z with a flick of a wrist
The stacatto note nailed with a flick of a wrist
The team moves up
The bows slide up
Wrist stays smooth
The crowd goes off!
by Fabian R.
posted by CDCStudent @ 8:55 AM
4 Comments:
Great auditory 'imagery' here. I enjoyed your comparison of the sounds of a game to musical sounds. It was very clever and it really held my interest.
does the title magic have a second meanng here...i feel the march madness in this poem....
Good job Fabian! Was this about a specific basketball game or maybe about the tournament?
Mrs. Silverman
I love that this poem has a rythum to it...it has a very good flow... I love it
Fantabulous Job Fabe!
-Roro
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