5 Ways to Look at a Toothbrush
In an aisle of toiletries
the thing that stands out
is a toothbrush.
A toothbrush in a sea of toothpaste
but it could only use one
at the other side.
A toothbrush is special-
it knows its job
We must find ours
in life.
He went on a long trip
When he opened his luggage
he found that he had forgot
his toothbrush.
The toothpaste is open-
the brush is ready to do its job.
Labels: Justin McGuire

2 Comments:
Justin, this could really develop into a great poem. The toothbrush is so important but underappreciated (until you forget it). Give that toothbrush a voice and let it be heard.
Very good poem, i wish i could write these as good as you!!!
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