What I am
This is what I am
I am a bomb about to explode
I am a lion, hear me roar
I am a robot programmed for one thing
I am a soldier strapped for battle
I am a pencil ready to write all over you
This is what I am
I am a bomb about to explode
I am a lion, hear me roar
I am a robot programmed for one thing
I am a soldier strapped for battle
I am a pencil ready to write all over you
Gerald D
posted by CDCStudent @ 11:15 AM
11 Comments:
Great use of imagery! You can really feel the emotions of the poem coming through.
So...what are you programmed for?
good job
well you were great
your poems are the best..
YA BOI HANSEL
its aiight but waz good w/ dat rap u had...put it on...i wanna hear it...
It was good and also funny
maaaan ur poem is the best man woow u should make anotha wun and how could u get so meny comments geez kelvin...
keep up the good work
this peom is fire....
good job dude that is some good metaphores
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