Ripped Drop
i was a puddle
waiting to be evaporated
but i got stepped in and splashed
i rippled and broke
and some of my raindrops ripped off me
i hoped to reunite with them in a cloud
but it started to rain again
and my raindrops came back to me.
Labels: by kayla v.
posted by CDCStudent @ 2:23 PM
4 Comments:
What nice imagery - so clear I could really see it in my mind.
loved it girl, right on
natalia pena
Kayla -- What an inventive poem! You've created a wonderful example of an "extended metaphor." I hope you'll keep writing!
You made the water cycle much more interesting!
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