The Picture to Remember
I am…
A picture on the wall
By myself next to a friend
Scared to take the picture
Not feeling to take it
Happy and now, I’m putting it in MySpace
Pretty in the picture but my friend, he’s alright
Cool taking a picture with him
He doesn’t like it
But I do
He doesn’t want me to put it on MySpace but I’m willing to take it
He’s mad at me
I love it!
I really don’t want to take it off
It remembers that perfect day we had together
By: YANELL A.
posted by CDCStudent @ 9:11 AM
2 Comments:
Hi Yanell A! When you said that you were in the picture 'by yourself' but also with a friend, it made me think about how that could feel. Thank you for being so honest in your poetry.
I love the last line of your poem because of the way you personify the picture--"It remembers that perfect day." You're right; if pictures had a job it would be to remember things for us! Very insightful.
Ms. Jones from Louisiana
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