Ode to a Brown Leaf
brown
dark brown
rustling in the wind
like a tumbleweed
for the forests
everybody stepping on you
for you are a soldier
just escaping death
charging with the wind
or playing dead until
you are picked up again
waiting for the right moment
then launching yourself
out of a tree
like a sky-diver,
but for war with no parachute
and then you stop moving
because you were shot
and having to be amputated
for your spine was destroyed
and you are paralyzed
never going to move again
and to be pushed around
for a while
after you die
Chris H.

2 Comments:
I think your poem was great.I also think that you are a great poet.I liked your metaphor about a soldier I would have never thought of that.
I LOVE this poem!
I can picture what you're describing so clearly in my mind that I can almost feel the leaf in my hand. Not many poets can do this as well as you ahve. There's a lot I liked here, including the metaphors, but my favorite part (even though it's sad) is "your spine was destroyed" because I can see the little spine of a dry brown leaf getting all broken..."and to be pushed around for a while after you die," because I can see a broken little leaf getting kicked and blown in the wind, and it makes me happy that someone took the trouble to notice it and write about it.
Keep writing!
-Ms. Jones in Louisiana
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