War is Hell
Marther Luther King said "I have a dream"
and in Lincoln's hands laid slaves holding their fate.
Through the war was broken a blinding wall.
The light came through and their hearts were no longer dark
and who's was the fault to blame?
I ask you, what is guilt if there was no blame?
For what is a student without a dream?
For where would we stop before the world grows dark?
For the burden of the children will lead us to our fate.
And I woke up in the 4th vigil and stood above the wall.
For boundaries do not stop me, neither will that wall.
And even Thomas Paine cried that we were not to blame.
My mother is love and freedom is my fate.
Will I be crushed by others or shall I continue to dream?
Samson was a hero yet his heart was still dark.
George Washington was a general and a man without a dream.
And when there was no hope, came Grant and gave us our fate.
And he spoke "when the enemy attacks build me a stone wall."
War came and came again just like light to dark.
Let it be said again "all war is hell" when there is no one to blame!
by Elmo

5 Comments:
Hi Elmo,
What an ambitious poem! I like your use of allusions to historical figures like Lincoln and Paine and King. And "Samson was a hero yet his heart was still dark" is just brilliant. So many heroes in literature (and real life) have a dark side to them, you have hit on an important theme. I enjoyed this!
-Ms. Jones from Louisiana
i really like your poem because if your weren't there at the time. you really captured the moment.
so good job!
Elmer,
Wow, you were all over the historical spectrum with this poem and I loved it. You incorporate a great mix of Bibllical, Civil War and philosophical ideas and make them work. Your ability to make connections has always impressed me and I continue to look at your ever evolving work with pride. Keep it up.
damn dis peom iz jst fire
this poem is hot i have always known ur color and ur race means a lot to u but this poem is cool
...*BRI*...
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