Love
I found my mate
Like a fish in water
Looking in your eyes
I found everything I craved for
Like the cherry in a chocolate bonbon
Like spring fever
I found my mate
I found my mate
Like a fish in water
Looking in your eyes
I found everything I craved for
Like the cherry in a chocolate bonbon
Like spring fever
I found my mate
Natalie V.
posted by CDCStudent @ 9:03 AM
4 Comments:
I love cherries in bonbons. I hope my mate is that sweet!
Neat structure to your poem! I like the imagery, too.
Interesting use of simile! The comparisons are very creative.
I like your poem because it is happy and light, just like spring fever. Your poem is like a feel good movie! Keep smiling!
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