I on Day 2
I am...
a twig but
stronger than a redwood tree
a blanket of the
first winter snow
a driver
racing the Daytona 500
a group of 50 people
scattering when a volcano blows
a baby iceberg floating
away form Antarctica
I am
a dark and narrow path
a worm out of the
ground as it rains
a patch of woods
struggling to move away
a laboratory always
being used for experiments
I am...
a twig but
stronger than a redwood tree
a blanket of the
first winter snow
a driver
racing the Daytona 500
a group of 50 people
scattering when a volcano blows
a baby iceberg floating
away form Antarctica
I am
a dark and narrow path
a worm out of the
ground as it rains
a patch of woods
struggling to move away
a laboratory always
being used for experiments
Chris H.
posted by CDCStudent @ 2:09 PM
5 Comments:
SWEET POEM DUDE
very deep man
I love the contrast with the Volcano and Iceberg.
I love the imagery here--"a worm out of the ground as it rains" gives me such a clear mental picture and makes me think about how you might be like that. I also love the twig idea. Brilliant!
Ms. Jones, a friend of Mr. Costello from Louisiana
Terrific poem! You ARE deep.
So many metaphors for a person with more potential to be revealed. Nice job.
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