COLD
I am so cold
My toes are trembling and shaking
So mystified by the strong wind
Hitting my face especially my dry chin
Walking in the night with no sunlight
To heat me up and keep me warm.
By: Edward M.
posted by CDCStudent @ 8:52 AM
Friday, March 09, 2007
I am so cold
My toes are trembling and shaking
So mystified by the strong wind
Hitting my face especially my dry chin
Walking in the night with no sunlight
To heat me up and keep me warm.
By: Edward M.
6 Comments:
The image you created reminds me of why I love spring so much. Good job.
I'm impressed boy... didn't actually know you knew some big words!!
That messed up Lahaye.
Hi Edward,
I love the sound of this poem...cold/toes, wind/chin night/sunlight may not all be exact rhymes, but the assonance makes them sound great together!
Ms. Jones, a friend of Mr. C from Louisiana
You have created some really great images here, like the trembling toes and the cold wind hitting the speaker's chin. Keep up the good work!
i like how you used so much description! good job
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