CDCS Poets

Friday, March 09, 2007

About him…


I wonder!
It’s confusing!
I like him or not
It’s weird!
Sometimes I get mad or get happy
I just want him to be him
It’s not me, it’s him!
I want him to be mine
It’s weird but were friends
But I want more than that
Life is unfair
I’m willing to take that
He picks up my phone but I get nervous
I feel weird talking to him
Sometimes
But I can’t get him off my mind
When I hear his name,
It makes me what to jump off the chair and scream his name out!
FELIX!

By: YANELL A.

3 Comments:

At 11:16 AM, Anonymous Anonymous said...

I think you described your feelings really well and what's going through yuor mind. I really liked it.

 
At 11:51 AM, Anonymous Anonymous said...

You've shown how people can have very mixed feelings about a person - sometimes not liking him, and sometimes wanting him to be yours. Conflicts like this can make a good poem.

 
At 12:21 PM, Anonymous Anonymous said...

I like the way you described your tug of war feelings. Sometimes our head and heart do not agree. Keep up the good work and keep smiling.

 

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